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The trees so lush,
Snow in a snow globe.
I found a new continent,
In the mist’s of a wardrobe.

I saw a bright lamppost,
I met a new friend.
He made me run quickly,
A law he did offend.

Edmond and I went home quickly,
He told the others I lied.
When he broke a window,
We all had to hide.

We went into the wardrobe,
A new continent they saw.
We went to my friend’s house
A note pined on the door.

We ran and hid,
And soon Santa came.
He told us of the spell,
And spring came again.

The witch had Edmond,
Soon help came around.
Then we met Aslan,
On his battleground.

Then Aslan died,
You could here all the moans.
Somehow we won the battle,
And sat in our thrones.

Years went on,
And we found the lamppost.
Then we returned,
To the place we admired most.
©2007-2009 ~Faldo-r
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A poem I made On Narnia.

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:icondreamgirll:
I really loved that movie, and Aslan. I think you did quite well with the poem, captured so much from the movie :)

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Don't hurt my heart
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Yo-Ho! Haul together! Hoist the colors high!
Heave-Ho, thieves and beggars! Never shall we die!
:iconhollygalah:
You have done an absolutely brilliant job on this. You should be very proud of yourself. :glomp:
:icondreamgirll:
Very much welcome, you deserve it !!

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Don't hurt my heart
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Yo-Ho! Haul together! Hoist the colors high!
Heave-Ho, thieves and beggars! Never shall we die!
:iconirandomrln96:
this is really good! :)

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I love twilight! <3
:iconainrana:
Cool!
I've read every single Narnia book, and I just wanna say that it's cool that I ain't alone! :omfg:
:iconfaldo-r:
Thanks for the comment! i will be posting some more poetry, not relating to Narnia though.

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